Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed>
Nowadays, certain industries such as fashion, information technology, and innovation have created a new model of employment as being self-employed. However, people who work for an organization still outweigh those who work for themselves. Although there are factors that make people prefer entrepreneurship, drawbacks cannot be neglected.
To start with, there are several reasons that make self-employment trending, particularly among the young generation. First, following orders and taking co-workers’ diverse opinions into account can be extremely suffocating. However, being an entrepreneur always allow one to include one's own ideas and preferences. Moreover, being a master of one’s self can give a feeling of luxury and improve a person’s identity and image in the surrounding. People are also being told that they have no boundaries for success and can potentially become as wealthy as Steve Jobs for example.
Financially, it is also no longer a miracle to set up a new company. In many countries like US and Canada, bank loans are assessable and highly granted to anyone who can provide enough detailed information on starting up a new business. A lot of business seminars and educational workshops which train youngsters who are dreaming of becoming businessmen and experts in various careers can be found too.
Turning to the other side, there are also disadvantages for self-employed people. For instance, it becomes a necessity for them to be ‘jack of all trades.’ By that I mean they need to perform the tasks of departments as many as possible, from marketing to manufacturing. Moreover, unlike working for a company, they are the only ones responsible if they take leaves for maternity, family vacation, or personal issues. At the same time, hiring employees demand a convenient workplace and other facilities which may cost a fortune. If unfortunate, threats of going bankrupt can be faced unless any profit is not made after the starting-up period.
To summarize, becoming an innovator and building your own company is, indeed, an inspiring dream for anyone in any career. Nevertheless, since there can be a lot of potential problems and financial risks, most people prefer playing it safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prefer playing it safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, i mean, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13135688135 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4470454362 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331552464946 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100071788591 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582502789144 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184961140868 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868057094984 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.