Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
What might be be the case?
What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?
In current days, every person’s choice depend on personal preference, including work, too. Some people prefer to work for themselves, while others believe that it is better to work in a team with colleagues. Although self employment has its own advantages, such as independence and more money, working in company could benefit more. This essay will discuss what are the causes for people to work alone and how it could negatively affect carrer.
First of all, work with team would develop skills of communication, development by helping each other. In addition, company employees are more friendly, and they have a lot of different events, where all of them go together to such celebrations. For example, corporate party for the Christmas, or New Year events, where they can enjoy the moment and spend unpredictable and interesting day with people. All in all, work in organizations could bring a lot of benefits to employees in different spheres.
On the other side, some people have own businesses without any supporting and team. In my opinion, these type of people have more problems than employees who work in organizations.
Additionally, usually they have less social activities and communications. For instance, if business people could have too many problems, no one could help them in such stressful situations. I think that this type of work have more difficulties and disadvantages, and do not recommend people to work without fun and help.
To conclude, from all these words it clearly obvious that people should work with teams or friends in general companies and organizations. Because In my point of view, work with collective is more convenient than work without aid or someone’s support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in general, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23826714801 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0047944416 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8139608712 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144174232617 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540809062562 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368036435608 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863807051957 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409216144912 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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