Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
The pasts 20 years have seen the dramatic increase in freelancers - those people who decide to become self-employed instead of working for a company or organisation. In this essay, the reasons and the disadvantages of this phenomenom will be revealed.
it is an undeniable fact that becoming freelancers give people more freedom than becoming employees in a specific institution. Bisides, pressures and stresses with the workload, the bosses or the colleagues are likely to be the assumption of most population. Therefore, I personally believe that those are mainly reasons that leads this increase.
Being self-employed is attched with some drawbacks. Firstly, there is no contract between workers and the companies, so people are easy to change their jobs. And the result is that the short employee turnover has grown considerably, the companies have faced big problems for finding new ones. Secondly, freelancers are usually considerd as people who work alone at home or in their own spaces. Admittedly, this can be the potental for isolating themselves with the community because they don't go to the workplac and miss one of the most easy chances to meet and communicate to the co-workers. For a long time, this might make them lack of social skills such as ways to make new friends, ways to share problems, etc.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirms that the self-employed has increased because it brings to people more freedom and the obssession about stresses in the company is also the cause. Definitely this phenomenom is not as much good as most people still keep thinking about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17490494297 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89805157623 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0055559809 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.692307692 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30308761245 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993176518657 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782189617921 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179673926789 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737752375882 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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