Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. There are different reasons for it. I will explain it in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the question first is why might this be the case. Do you find that economy level declined since the economic crisis? A trade war with China may put many people out of work. During the economic crisis, many people were unable to provide useless jobs, and they tried to be self-employed. At the same time, it has more self employment opportunities than before. This job market is almost mature. The standard of recruitment is higher and higher. Many graduation students do not want to do low income work, but they are willing to become a boss. On the other hand, some people don't want to accept a terrible boss. If he has management ability, he would rather be the boss. He doesn't have to be angry with the boss.
Secondly, the question in the second is what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed, which means opportunities and risks. After all, these people should have management skills, and she or he should convince employees. It is a very important point is that the self-employed are an investment in themselves. If they fail to invest, they may lose more money. Self employment may cost them extra money for their projects. I heard about some people borrow a lot of money for self employment, but they can not pay back because of failure in their project.
To sum up, self-employed is a good idea to solve some problem, but it also has risks and people should act with caution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, after all, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71071428571 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72624246155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3332959557 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8095238095 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48298400887 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122905822587 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148273398425 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282127792361 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128120969046 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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