Nowadays, many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?
These days, a lot of people prefer to be a freelance worker instead of working for a company or firm. This may be due to work flexibility and independence that comes with being self employed. It however has its drawbacks which are, financial insecurities and lack of employee benefits.
To begin with, most people have choosen to be their own boss because of work flexibility. This is because, they are able to work from their comfort zones at any time, without restrictions, thus increasing their productivity. This implies that they can focus on both house chores and at the same time official duties. To illustrate, a study carried out in the United States revealed that most people especially women, prefer to be freelance workers as it allows them to take care of their kids and also earn money. Furthermore, being self employed allows one to be independent. That is, individuals can take business risks and decisions without having to go through some cumbersome processes for approval. Consequently, leaving the fate of the company to one person.
Some of the drawbacks of being self employed include financial insecurities and lack of employee benefits. Finances are a major aspect of an organisation. Freelance companies are at risk of financial insecurities because of irregular income, and having to pay for the bills with or without generating profit. For example, Greenspring farms, a self owned farm in Nigeria, recently folded up due to poor management of funds as a result of more expenses than income. As a result, rendering many jobless. In addition, working for one's self deprives one of employee's benefits such as pensions and holiday allowance. Thus, making it impossible or difficult to enjoy these freebies.
In conclusion, many people are tending towards self employment because of work flexibility and independence. Financial insecurities and lack of employee benefits like pensions, holiday allowances are notable drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26198083067 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94313889786 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0921207639 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6842105263 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357217484843 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109704305799 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119957787104 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226772054829 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677558094777 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.