Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home.why do you think it is happen? what are the advantages and disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, people in this modern era are too advanced that they prefer to eat from food from restaurants instead of cooking at home. According to my diagnosis, there are several reasons behind this phenomenon. However, it has both pros and cons.
To commence with, thisphenomena of eating food from outside rather than home is caused by two main reasons. Firstly, people have no time to cook food at home due to their hectic schedules. To be more precise, more number of masses in this modern world prefer to earn more and more money because they think that they can buy everything with money. To earning more capital they do extra work that's why they do not invest their precious time in cooking food because they know that they can eat food without cooking by ordering from restaurants. Secondly, some human beings love to eat different varieties of food. To elaborate, as people cannot be able to make all kind of haute cuisine at home due to this they have to visit restaurants to eat various foods.
On the one hand, there is one advantages of eating food outside from home. Primary, by ordering food from restaurants masses can save their time. In other words, making food at home is a time-consuming process which is not good for the worker's life. However, if they eat packet food, then they can preserve their time to utilize on other crucial task.
On the other hand, this pattern of purchasing food from outside also have adverse effect on human beings. Predominant one is that it is harmful to their health. In explanation, most of the packaged foods are too oily and contain excess amount of fat inside them which is not beneficial for humans because it causes serious diseases like obesity. Therefore, people are more unhealthy by eating junk food despite homemade food.
To sum up, although hectic schedule and peoples nature of eating different foods are the main reason, but I think it has both merits and demerits for human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, kind of, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40290058781 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529585798817 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5615124862 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18894882411 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683453329407 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554667892709 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112008323782 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307870024227 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.