Nowadays, many people decide to have their first child in their later life. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In our modern society, there is an ongoing trend that people choose to bear children later in life. This development can be attributed to financial burden and people’s prioritisation on career development, and I firmly believe that this could have positive implications for child-rearing.
There are several compelling reasons for delayed parenthood in today’s society. First and foremost, most young parents are struggling with financial instability, which makes it difficult for them to provide basic necessities for themselves, not to mention their babies. This, coupled with the escalating cost of childcare, education and medical services nowadays, could put a huge strain on young couples, and trigger their postponed childbirth accordingly. Financial hardships aside, work commitment is also a driving force behind late childbearing. Some individuals have a tendency to invest more time on pursuing their career, and having children could be a major distraction. For example, doctors are often occupied with the colossal workload at the hospital, which deprives them of time on nurturing a child if they give birth at an early age.
With the aforementioned reasons, I acknowledge that the advantages of this trend are justifiable. First, as people allocate more time to establishing their financial stability and attaining their career advancement, they can afford high-quality services for their children. To illustrate, parents can provide their offspring with proper education and top-rated medical services, which ensures a better life for kids in years to come. Moreover, the older people become, the more experienced in bringing up children they get. Such hands-on experience could assist them tremendously in raising a well-rounded kid. In contrast, lack of experience in young couples could be the precursor to poor parenting skills, which exerts a detrimental impact on children’s development.
In conclusion, delayed childbirth could be ascribed to monetary difficulties and emphasis on career progression, and I believe that this trend has unquestionably positive impacts on children’s growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... makes it difficult for them to provide basic necessities for themselves, not to mention their ba...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75873015873 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16098029451 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7414626591 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.933333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196334533507 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064840772037 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538079775673 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118351918255 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556989354117 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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