Food plays a vital role in human life because it provides human with a huge source of nutrients which are significantly necessary to build up human body. However, nowadays, many consume bad food containing plenty of toxin and lipid like fast food, even though there have been many information about ways to have a health or balance diet. This essay will give an analysis of the negative consequences if people continue eating such a bad food on a regular basis and then will recommend some possible solutions to this problem.
It is definitely proved that ingesting too much junk food will have negative impact on human health. Firstly, it can cause the overweight of human. This is because of a large amount of starch and lipide content which make human more overweight rapidly. As a result, this will lead to many other kinds of serious diseases including digestive disorder, heart system, lipid in blood. More importantly, this can be caused cancer. Furthermore, human brain system will be affected. For this reason, our memory will not be as flexible as it used to be.
Therefore, to decrease the consumption of bad blood, in my opinion, governments should impose higher tax in this kind of food with a view to reducing the ingestion of it. Additionally, instead of eating fast food, human had better consume food containing both vitamin, mineral contents and fibrous matter in combination with doing more more exercise so that human life will be improved, healthier and more balanced.
In summary, fast food affects directly to our health such as heart diseases, digestive diseases and our brain system as well. Hence, I hope that my measures will be useful for improving the quality of human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun toxin seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of toxins'.
Suggestion: plenty of toxins
...adays, many consume bad food containing plenty of toxin and lipid like fast food, even though t...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
... fast food, even though there have been many information about ways to have a health...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
... fast food, even though there have been many information about ways to have a health or balance ...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: more
...ibrous matter in combination with doing more more exercise so that human life will be imp...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
...ibrous matter in combination with doing more more exercise so that human life will be imp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96864111498 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58342573974 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592334494774 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6755607436 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185775937008 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673676539898 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526553119336 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11079255196 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783716666343 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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