Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home.
What are the causes of this?
What are the effects of this on individual and society?
Today, spending a valuable time at home has been declined significantly as compared to the past. This essay will discuss the main reasons of this major issue and how it affects both individual and society.
In this competitive modern world family life became a challenge and people indeed work hard in order to acquire a better and stable life. Also, many parents are breadwinners of their family so they need to work more hours for look after their older parents and children. Consequently, a quite a lot if them are engaged with their job, study or research and business. In this circumstances, majority of people may not spend a quality time with their loved ones at home.
This situation adversely affect both personnel and community life. In fact, interpersonal relationship with family members have dropped considerably because, people do not have a time to spend with family members. Gradually, certain situations may create conflicts between husband and sometimes between parents and children. For instance, children often should be go out with their parents othewise they may generate many issues at home and also it seriously affect them mentally.
Another justification is that in this computer world, employees are forced to work extra or long hours by companies and this make them extra burden and tired. As a result, they would not have enough time to spend on. Moreover, unless every person should spend adequate time with their relatives and neighbours, it will adversely ruin the companionship with them. It also makes break down a real relationships due to decreasing communication and disappearance during some ceremonial functions or festival.
To sum up, spending precious time at home is an essential for human beings because they are social animals. However, some situations make them busy. Thus, it not only develops a massive impact on every individual but also their public life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18770226537 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75337021453 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6801564898 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2941176471 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214680798211 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733559254888 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646648083404 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137283730602 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455352703692 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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