Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items, what are the reasons for this, do you think it is a positive or negative development?
These days, the market has been a lot of branded provides products and services that are rapidly increasing in popularity. In this essay I will discuss the reason for this phenomenon increasing. While there are some drawbacks of this major, I consider it to be more beneficial.
There are many reasons why people are going forward to get brands. Firstly, an increase in population creates a new competitive market which it makes a diversity of brands that target specific categories. Secondly, one of the important movements happening in the market that the role of advertising it is reflect on people and make competition between brands. Branded items are also shown to improve the quality of product and try to gap the needs in market, therefore reflect the growing economy and also the purchasing power of people has gone up.
There are many advantages that in product, on of this advantage is that companies enhance the quality of product and also care of customers’ service. Because of this the impact on condition of product will reflect on business and hence people are offered better services. For example, if a person buys a branded car, but unfortunately its problem cause for any reason, the customer can get a full replacement and provide it with is warranty. Another positive effect is that their brands have led to be a big industry that will establish a lot of jobs and that effect on the economy.
One of the drawbacks, that brands tend to impact a bad negative on people feeling like inadequacy and want to get more from this product. As a consequence, people are overspending on such items even though that may be a shortfall in the budget of the family. Another disadvantage, increased crime like shoplifting that happens because some of people need to get this brand. Finally, people are becoming in stressed and stain because they buy a lot of products that can be dispensed.
In conclusion, although brands can be blamed for many reasons, I believe this is the rising an abundant product in market and it will be a positive development overall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reflected'.
Suggestion: reflected
...rket that the role of advertising it is reflect on people and make competition between ...
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Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...e like shoplifting that happens because some of people need to get this brand. Finally, people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87818696884 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74457615675 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512747875354 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9732776421 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259192165965 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865348415093 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490995933044 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14902653253 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264000004609 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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