Undoubtedly, most of the people dreams to wear high branded attires and use luxurious things, whereas it shows the quality of life you are living. but spent such money on some investment purpose can make individual rich too. both of the facts are reasonable according to requirements.
Although, Its a positivity that someone spent money on brands whether it can boost up the quality of living and Yes, society currently judges the people by their clothes and their living style. individual can enhance their personality by spent some funds on attires and luxurious items as well as branded items also reasonable to their qualities as compare to giffen good.
On the other hand, it also make a negative impact on life, as its worth to some a lot of money on brands, one can earn assets by invest his money in share market or in mutual funds. However, use funds to learn anything can make you more attractive and can enhance the skills too. For instance, as per the study MARK ZUCKERBERG, owner a FACEBOOK neither wear any branded clothes, as he is one of the most richest personality of world. It proves that improvement of skills is much important than buy expensive goods.
To conclude, spent money to buy expensive and branded items can be benefitted to raise the living quality as well as use money to learn something new could be much benefitted. and Its analyzed that one should invest his money to transform his brain by learn new skills and make them more attractive efficiently.
- some people believes that government should banned the tourism as it effects the local culture while others thinks that it is inevitable and it should not require any changes discuss both views 56
- Some people believe that to protect local culture tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or a negative development 61
- Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leader Others think that people can learn leadership skills Discuss both views 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
...ows the quality of life you are living. but spent such money on some investment pur...
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Suggestion: Both
...t purpose can make individual rich too. both of the facts are reasonable according t...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e according to requirements. Although, Its a positivity that someone spent money o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individual
...y their clothes and their living style. individual can enhance their personality by spent ...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...iffen good. On the other hand, it also make a negative impact on life, as its worth...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'richest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: richest
...ny branded clothes, as he is one of the most richest personality of world. It proves that im...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the richest'.
Suggestion: most the richest
...ny branded clothes, as he is one of the most richest personality of world. It proves that im...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...something new could be much benefitted. and Its analyzed that one should invest his...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77906976744 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54997817217 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6986174448 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132605191811 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512472628077 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322526091559 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832140149615 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261987319055 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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