Undoubtedly, leadership skills are god gifted and one can learn it according to their requirements. Therefore, some peoples thinks that some individuals are good leaders by born, while others believes that one can learn leadership qualities. Both of the views are analyzed below.
on the one hand, It is assumed that the qualities of leaders are elaborated between them by birth, and it can be justify by most of famous personalities in our world like ABRAHIM LINCOLN and APJ ABDUL KALAM both of them was proved one of the best presidents. For instance, ABRAHIM LINCOLN was not accessed his study because of poverty, and he stated all of his intelligent classmates wrong in his further life as by achieving the success in presidentship of united states. however its also depend on the culture of family in which whom is living as most families are managing small businesses in which they also have lots of leadership qualities, so its also proven to be a god gifted if someone is naturally a good leader.
On the other side, society believes that managing skills can be learn, as by working in team management environment. Although, it can be improves by the courage of anyone, that one can built up such skills by learning it from some leaders. For example, most of the politicians cannot achieve that much success in their politician life as because of lack of leadership skills. Moreover, most of the peoples improve their managing skills by learning it from professional teachers. As well as, anyone can learn leadership skills according to their requirements to fulfill their desired goals effectively and efficiently.
To conclude, managing qualities can be god gifted as well as it can be learn by anyone, As i personally think that learning leadership skills can enhance one's knowledge according their needs....
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...cess in presidentship of united states. however its also depend on the culture of famil...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...cess in presidentship of united states. however its also depend on the culture of famil...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... learning leadership skills can enhance ones knowledge according their needs....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03630363036 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82083051908 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511551155116 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0019289828 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344863208366 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139547482679 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120969188708 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248213355726 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153963331473 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...oth of the views are analyzed below. on the one hand, It is assumed that the qu...
^^
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...cess in presidentship of united states. however its also depend on the culture of famil...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...cess in presidentship of united states. however its also depend on the culture of famil...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... learning leadership skills can enhance ones knowledge according their needs....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03630363036 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82083051908 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511551155116 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0019289828 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344863208366 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139547482679 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120969188708 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248213355726 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153963331473 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.