Nowadays, many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their course in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefit to individual students, it also brings a number of disadvantages.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad and give your opinion.
In these time significant amount student are going abroad to persue their studies. It has huge advantages for the students however it also involves some demerits.
students travelling abroad to studies has many advantages for student himself. Firstly, they are getting opportunities of better education system because mostly students who travel overseas are going to country that has standards education system. For instance, large number of Nepali students are doing their studies in australia. it is due to poor education system of Nepal, students are approaching for universally recognised institutions outside their country like in australia. Secondly, it provides wider scope of job hence more earning.If they did their studies from the institution which offer globally acceptable degree then they can work at any institution or place they want to do job without any obligations.
On the other hand, it does have some disadvantages of studying I foreign countries. The students of particular countries might face language barrier which will lead to poor communication and difficulties in understanding the subject as well as not being able to clarify with subject teacher in particular language. hence, it result in low academic performance. Additionally, maladaptation to the system of education or the level of education could cause the problem to the student. For example, the level of higher secondary school of america is higher than Nepal. Nepali student might not able to uphold with their studies with the students of america.
In conclusion, while there are some drawbacks for students to study in foreign countries, but this opportunity will uplift their living standards. Therefore, I think it has brought many more benefits than disadvantages to the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94932181587 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5177649246 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9333333333 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30707149501 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11643864542 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968202319696 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2022999281 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072681354319 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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