Nowadays many young people are often spending their free time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
There is no escape from the fact that these days a majority of young people spend long hours in malls and shopping centers. In my opinion, although seeming as a waste of time, this phenomenon has significant boons in its favor.
On one hand, it is an undeniable fact that shopping centers may not be the best place to spend leisure time as a youngster. This activity would decrease the time he could dedicate to sports at gym or extracurricular subjects. Moreover, such luxury behaviors would widen the gap between the poor and rich in a society leading to a group of them getting emotionally disturbed and frustrated as they would not have the power to compete with others.
However, despite those said disadvantages, there are also some positive points on the bright side.one of the most magnificent advantages of being is such environments is to get in contact with a various range of diverse personalities which enhances an individual’s social skills as well as his self-confidence. This person, additionally, would be equipped with a more well-rounded perspective on the market place though not only can he come up with better financial decisions, but also he could even start a successful business based on his experience.
Beside mentioned boons, juveniles spending their free time at shopping malls would provide them the opportunity to get in touch with the state of the art technology. It is obvious that having a broad overlook on upcoming gadgets and equipment would be so practical in both personal and working life.
By way of conclusion, while accepting the drawbacks of the increase in shopping center’s exploring by juveniles, it appears to me that the advantages of this emerging habit overweight its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 138, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...he opportunity to get in touch with the state of the art technology. It is obvious that having a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13240418118 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08693497285 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.938777999 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.3 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169622752238 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695736215915 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455046979572 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966877665229 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465240557747 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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