Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
New generations are more concentrated on their lives vision like, having a baby after the settlement of life. There are many reasons behind that such as, later marriage, changing attitude towards the job and family. However, having children in thee elderly period would make a serious issue in modern world.
Firstly, significant changes in the marriage year is the main problem of youth. Such as, everyone wants an esteemed position in the field of job and marriage and thus, they would spend their time and effort to become a high status of their lives. After graduation, people often try to get a well job than being married. Secondly, even though, some early wedded couples would most likely to enjoy their married life without settled with children and responsibility. Furthermore, many others believe that, elderly parents could take care of their offspring the the young couples as well.
Nevertheless, there are many disadvantages of such attitude of young couples namely, maternal complications in preterm and post term. Along with that, researchers explain that, babies from elderly mothers would often get a high chance to be growth defects, brain problems, and many other health problems too. In addition, the life span of human is falling down in every year census and such decisions might have increase the number of orphans.
In conclusion, the tendency to have a baby in later age would most probably a catastrophe of human beings. So that early marriage and being parents in the young age would mitigate the consequent effect. Other mentioned points would not make any kind of betterment in anyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ents could take care of their offspring the the young couples as well. Nevertheless,...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ents could take care of their offspring the the young couples as well. Nevertheless,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12452830189 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55431841042 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5077735792 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153809404326 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505655478399 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494952354611 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963893956918 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676414743537 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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