Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Everyone is busy with their schedule in modern life. A recent decades are witness of development in social sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. according to phenomenon, faction of people argue that to have children later in life. there are several merits and demerits of this thought. I will try to throw light upon the declaration of having children in later life. As well as I will try to posit my perspective about it.
To start with, there are multifarious reason to shore those people who are in favor of having offspring in elder life. The first reason is that in contemporary era, both are working parents. so, both have no times to spend with infant so they decided to have child after certain time. Another reason from my eyesight is poor financial condition or beginning of their career. To explain, people who have started their career recently, they do not have any future plan except saving money. this can be main cause the because of parents have poor condition than how they manage the financial status after children.
On the other side of spectrum, there are several impact on social life. The predominant effect is women have to listen some harsh word from community as well as neighbours without thinking anything. As a result the detrimental impact has been considered on their personal life, as people make doubt on genetic problem. The second impact which has produced due to above thinking is after certain time of born baby, it would be unhealthy with physique. As well as the gap between two generation has got higher as age is grown. this might adversely affect the quality of the future work force if too many people decide to follow this trend.
Aggelomerating, all the point that I elaborated an above it can be conclude that some positive aspects according to having infant after certain time have more pressure outweigh the negative aspects of criticism from social people or neighbour. that is why, I support those people who are in favor of having children in later life because it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84444444444 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48950885136 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4780219376 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0476190476 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304898930814 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878700351357 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844042022748 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186829915001 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392750394831 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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