Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In recent years, parents’ decision to have offspring later in their life has become an increasingly popular trend. Resulting from a number of causes, this situation may have various considerable impacts on not only each family life but also the whole community.
There are several reasons why people refuse to give birth when they are young. Firstly, rather than embarking on parenthood, a variety of individuals consider that building their own successful careers is top-priority. If they split their time between working and rearing their offspring when they are at the early stage of their careers, their concentration upon their work might be negatively affected, which results in several difficulties in enhancing their job performance and getting promotion. Secondly, delaying childbirth could give young people countless opportunities to enjoy their lives. For example, this choice may let couples have more time to focus on improving their social lives and pursuing their passions. However, this tendency might result in a variety of negative effects on both family life and society. The first impact is that due to a widening generation gap between two age groups, child nurturing could be a huge challenge for older parents. Even though they have high socioeconomic status, as well as great experience and knowledge, it is not easy for them to communicate and understand their offspring. Furthermore, getting pregnant after 35 years old is potentially harmful to maternal and children’s health [6]. Specifically, this could increase the risk of untoward outcomes including stillbirth and miscarriage to older mothers, while their children might face the danger of getting Down's syndrome.
Consequently, this could negatively affect the quality of the workforce in times to come. In conclusion, there are a number of evident reasons for the trend in which people prefer having children late. As a result, this could negatively influence each family and all the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45631067961 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89389159453 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624595469256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9104086227 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233130880759 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738414797579 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509540183247 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156025780768 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421114278784 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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