Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Recently, many people do not want to have babies during their 20s. there are several reasons that cause this situation, which affect both society and family life.
Most people do not choose to have a children in their early adult ages due to the fact that they are on the way to build up their financial. Money has an important role in taking care of a baby because they need to pay for their child's essential needs and education. You will not want your child to be starving or not going to school. In addition, people are having a better education system, where women are no longer staying home babysitting anymore. they work on their own and improve their personal life. this is a big changes compare to the past, when men are the only ones who working. this leads to a situation that women do not want to have kids when they are able to move up in their careers.
However, there are effects on the society and their family life. many countries in the world encourage their citizens to have babies because many of them choose not to do so. this will affect the next generation, and the economic system due to lacking of human resources. having children later in their life will make a distance between parents and kids. The ages are too far from each others, different in generations and thoughts will lead to misunderstanding and communication problem between them.
In conclusion, there are variety of reasons that people choose to give birth later in their life that causes many effects on their society and thus family life. In fact, to have a baby, it is a whole considering period and preparation for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38605088205 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6244897917 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302242748051 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113602106038 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120537640809 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224914308067 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06733022679 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.