Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that many people tend to have children when they are getting older. While I accept that this idea might sometimes have a positive effect on children, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact. Also, this essay will elaborate the features of why many parents have this decision.
The main reason why people decide to have children later in their life is that they are afraid of not giving enough education opportunities for their children. Secondly, majority of people want to have a stable career and stable income before having their first child, as they are able to give the best standard of living for their children. Another factor is that young adults who are purchasing their successful career do not have much time for parental responsibility. Therefore, they would delay of having children.
There are obvious advantages of having children at a later stage of parents. People who are less stressed about job security or earning money would probably have more time to play and educate their children. As a result, this helps reducing children's mental health issues. However, plenty disadvantages of this trend need to be mentioned. Firstly, miscarriages and pregnant complications could be seen in women who are over 35 years old. Furthermore, from an educational knowledge, autism is one of disease which often appear on children who have aging parents. In addition, watching children become mature, have a satisfied life and get married is one kind of happiness for those who became parents, but people who are getting older before their children are growing up are lack of this thing.
In conclusion, it is understandable why many youngers choose to have children when they get older. Whereas I recognise the possible benefits of this trend, I consider it to be a negative development for both parents and young generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...their children. As a result, this helps reducing childrens mental health issues. However...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66880853975 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4195041623 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32805221374 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11228548386 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858551616215 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184484687409 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902798748046 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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