Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
It is true that the number of families decide to have children later have been increasing dramatically in recent years. There are various reasons behind this phenomenon, which is having adverse impacts on society and community as a whole.
There are two principle reasons why people tend to delay parenthood in their early stage. Firstly, it comes with no surprise that in the new era, all nations, especially the industrialised nations such as Japan and England, have the hectic pace of life and enormous workload, which make citizens feel more stressful and tired. Therefore, if parent make the prompt decision to have children when they are young, then it is more likely that they will bear more burden on their shoulders, not only with their own work, but also with the parenting responsibility. Furthermore, those young generations, who are well-educated and highly ambitious, would be inclined to fulfil their own dreams and pursue their lifelong ambition instead of focusing on nuturing their offspring, which could distract them from their career aspiration.
This trend, however, brings undesired impacts on both society and every single family. Admittedly, putting off having children early could lead to aged population in the long run, which is the huge headache that government officials, especially in developed world, has been facing unprecedentedly. As a result, the lack of young skilled workforce and army soldiers would be the seriously long-term problem. Besides, this phenomenon also greatly impair the quality of family life due to the large age gap between parents and children. If, for instance, parents are in their 50s, while their offspring are just teenager, then it will be tough for maintaining mutual understanding and sentimental bonds between family members. Children, therefore, would not have full development in both emotional and physical aspect, which could result in many social illnesses such as juvenile delinquency and teen alcohol and drug abuse, and so forth.
In conclusion, delayed childbearing, which results from heavy burden and career ambition, could influence profoundly family life and society as the whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...-educated and highly ambitious, would be inclined to fulfil their own dreams and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76803728138 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618343195266 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4099188818 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278596799018 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900348601224 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525002430984 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164918073243 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476489048721 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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