Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The tendency of contemporaries to live separately from their family is becoming increasingly popular. There is an opinion that this phenomenon has no positive consequences for society. Let us see the pros and cons of such a choice.
On the one hand, cohabitation can be a source of generational conflict when people of different ages have completely various ideas about doing household chores, duties and responsibilities. Often this is facilitated not so much by the accommodation of the offspring as by their spouse who has grew up in otherwise conditions and had a dissimilar view of life. The acute problem is widely reflected in classical literature, for instance, in Turgenev’s novel “Fathers and Sons” or in Griboedov’s comedy “Thunderstorm” which emphasize the shortcomings of living with the family. Moreover, such a lifestyle can contribute to emerge a psychologically immature personalities who spend most of their lives in comfortable conditions and cannot appreciate the reality of the so-called adult world, frequently refuse to have their children and strive merely for pleasure.
On the other hand, habitation with relatives provides the young generation with unlimited opportunities both to accumulate their own livelihoods by maintaining a common budget and to be a witness of any changes within the family and come by a first-class assistant, for example, to continue the business of kin. In addition, a conscious desire to stay away from family in a modern world is an obsession among youth people who seek success, prosperity and a career. However, the outcome of suchlike behavior may be the devaluation of communication with ancestors and reduces the significance of an individual in the family and world history as a whole that exists of such a cell of society meaningless.
In conclusion, the choice to live alone or with relatives depends on those advantages and disadvantages that a person sees for himself. Neither option guarantees unconditional positive or negative impact on the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55070624261 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0867162706 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.833333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214535729422 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697849816452 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312474026935 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121821920808 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020682750734 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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