Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is undeniable that deciding to live with friends and even alone in self-owned accomodation can be more preferable for most people in these days. Even though some people believe that this trend tends to have negative impacts on communities, I definately disagee because of what are the benefits obtining by this independent life.
First of all, living alone without relatives wil inevitably encourage individuals becoming more nuture. Instead of bringing out drawbacks for societies, this will contribute to positve development in both workplace productivity and communities itself. This is mainly because people with independent personality are able to assist the company, organizaton and community in many sectors , and this can be seen in their responsibility to finish their owned tasks without relying on their family. For instance, Students in universities living far away from their family tend to become responsible and even impactful person in the societies.
Another consideration by living alone will be the wide-ranged opportunity for searching the jobs in which they have became an expert. It is widely known that many fresh-graduated students whose skills in various sectors have lived in the countryside. So beneficial is to allow them living in the other cities that they are able to work and contribute in their spesific fields albeit far away from their hometown. For instance, many engineers and scientists in Indonesia decide to move and live alone to for the sake of working in industrialization areas such as Tangerang, Surabaya, Balikpapan and Jakarta.
In conclusion, how people decide to live has been altering significantly. I believe this will massively help individuals especially the young in terms of building their nuture and providing the chance to contribute more in societies based on their expertise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06293379822 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7930257817 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320485848919 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108777115229 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571721900576 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194438047272 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579678801935 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.