The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:
"Times New Roman",serif">Given is the line graph illustrating the percentage of
population in a specific country according to three age groups over the course
of 80 years from 1960 and a projection to 2040. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:
"Times New Roman",serif">It is obvious that the most significant proportion of
total population has belonged to the 15-64-year-old group. And while the rate
of the senior is expected to increase, the reverse is true for the other age
groups during the time given.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:
"Times New Roman",serif">In 1960, 55% of population were teenagers and adults,
which was nearly double the figure for the youngest group and triple figure for
the oldest one, with exactly 30% and 15%, respectively. The percentage of
citizens who aged from 15 to 64 experienced a fluctuation three decades later,
prior to being subjected to a marked decrease toward the end of the survey,
ending at approximately 45%.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify;line-height:150%"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:11.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:
"Times New Roman",serif">Between 1960 and 1990, there was a remarkable drop of
10% in the rate of population aging less than 14 years old, which is then predicted
to decline gradually to reach the trough at 10% in 2040. Meanwhile, the statistic
for the 65-and-plus group has surged by 30% and is going to peak at the same
level as the 15-64 group. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 8.41704035874 4.92477711251 171% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.5181482683 2.65546596893 509% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57399103139 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.45097560976 145% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.109676217 43.030603864 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 375.4 112.824112599 333% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083808767838 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682169263085 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265459684068 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482484779952 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520814476664 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.5 13.2329268293 306% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.48 61.2550243902 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.3012195122 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 32.44 11.4140731707 284% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 11.4329268293 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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