Recently, more people prefer buying food than cooking at home. This phenomenon has several positive and negative sides which will be explained in this essay.
Regarding the positive aspects, buying food is time saving particularly to those who spend their time mostly at work. To illustrate, working people on average spend 8 to 10 hours at office that make them tired enough and do not have enough time to cook. Moreover, ordering food from any stores on online will make more parents particularly mother have more quality time with their children. They can spare time more in optimize their role in parenting instead of thingking about breakfast or dinner menu. Additionally, eating mother’s food will make children have more memories and bonding with their family which will affect their grow.
In spite of the benefits, purchasing food also has several drawbacks. Firstly, the ready-to-eat foods are usually more pricey than cooking by our self because we usually have to pay more for tax and delivery cost. This could be a problem for those who struggling in financial. Furthermore, the more buying food the more garbage will be produced from its packaging which will harm our environtment. As we know, most of food packaging is made from plastics or sterofoam that potentially pollute our water and soil because they are not degradable.
In conclusion, buying food has its upsides and downsides. However, in my point of view, although we have little spare time, cooking more at home will help us save our money more and not doing harm to our environtment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05769230769 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56529811871 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9868672116 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246367976959 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100492498858 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872150095275 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184733809197 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715995812808 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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