Nowadays, numerous young people are less happy even though they have become richer, healthier and have longevity. While there is a number of underlining reasons for this phenomenon, some solutions can be taken to tackle this issue.
There are two primary reasons why young generation has suffered from this negative emotion. One reason is that as citizens concentrate too much on their work in order to make a living rather than taking care of their family members. As a result, they would have a loose connection with their beloved one which means they find it hard to share happiness and sorrows in their life to their family members. Furthermore, it is undeniable that in this ever-changing world people have to work so industriously that they even feel stressful and full of pressure. Eventually, they cannot handle with this mental disorder that are growing gradually insight themselves. Take Suri who is an well-known Korean singer as an example. While she is idolized not only by thousands of teenager all over the world but also by celebrities, she decided to suicide at her own house without a fatigue sign on her face over days before.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution is that having a balance style of working and relaxing is essential. For instance, trying to schedule time to have an intimate diner with their family regardless of that they are busy could strengthen their relationship. Consequently, it is much easier for them to alleviate the pressure of working. A second measure would be reduction of the load of work if they cannot cope up with such huge things need to do. Beside, if they are not really passionate about their careers, they should not hesitate to change to other occupations that make them happier.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for people feel less happy while they have almost everything in their hands, and effective steps need to be taken to improve this situation.
Nowadays, numerous young people are less happy even though they have become richer, healthier and have longevity. While there is a number of underlining reasons for this phenomenon, some solutions can be taken to tackle this issue.
There are two primary reasons why young generation has suffered from this negative emotion. One reason is that as citizens concentrate too much on their work in order to make a living rather than taking care of their family members. As a result, they would have a loose connection with their beloved one which means they find it hard to share happiness and sorrows in their life to their family members. Furthermore, it is undeniable that in this ever-changing world people have to work so industriously that they even feel stressful and full of pressure. Eventually, they cannot handle with this mental disorder that are growing gradually insight themselves. Take Suri who is an well-known Korean singer as an example. While she is idolized not only by thousands of teenager all over the world but also by celebrities, she decided to suicide at her own house without a fatigue sign on her face over days before.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution is that having a balance style of working and relaxing is essential. For instance, trying to schedule time to have an intimate diner with their family regardless of that they are busy could strengthen their relationship. Consequently, it is much easier for them to alleviate the pressure of working. A second measure would be reduction of the load of work if they cannot cope up with such huge things need to do. Beside, if they are not really passionate about their careers, they should not hesitate to change to other occupations that make them happier.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for people feel less happy while they have almost everything in their hands, and effective steps need to be taken to improve this situation.
- There is a widespread saying that books and novels spur the imagination and language skills much more than any TV programme I believe that this notion holds true no matter what modern technologies are used on TV and TV media production The reasons are sim 84
- The pie charts compare the water usage of various sectors of the economy in Sydney in two years 1997 and 2007 Overall it is clear that the sector which used the highest percentage of water was the food industry The percentage of total water use by the ser
- Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school Some people believe that this is a negative development while others think there are some benefits Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- the first man to walk on the moon said it was a great step for mankind But space travel has made little difference in most people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The table illustrates how much money was donated to developing countries in the period 2006 2010 by US and EU charities to support technological development Overall it is clear that total aid increased during this period US aid was considerably higher tha 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97313432836 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63709676529 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0516062414 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437061845918 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140524952143 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149889669945 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357376713567 0.151304729494 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.259414611546 0.056905535591 456% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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