Nowadays people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.
What might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Today, most of the people are more inclined to establish their own occupation than ever before. This approach benefits them from more job security and freedom. Nonetheless, there are also consequences in this choice, which should not be undermined.
It is an indisputable fact that the past decades have seen a considerable growth in the number of companies and organization, leading to more competition. In this situation, employers look for staff with extraordinary qualifications to overwhelm them with a wide variety of responsibilities and tight schedule. Many employees, as a result, prefer to find their own niche by being self-employed. Having the ability to manage their work, people would have more free time to spend for other aspects of life such as family, recreational activities and traveling without being manipulated by a principal.
However, it is crucial to consider this fact that this method has brought about major consequences. As people who work for themselves are alone most of the times, they can’t find enough opportunities to communicate with others. This results in detrimental effects their mental health, causing disorders such as depression and anxiety. It also gives them a sense of alienation, distancing them from their society. Furthermore, there is a high risk of collapse and losing business in this term. If entrepreneurs don’t have the knowledge of running a business, they will face serious challenges to tackle which can even culminate in bankruptcy.
By way of conclusion, being self-employed is going to be an increasing trend among members of society. In spite of its considerable advantages in terms of freedom and job security, the downside should not be forgotten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42435424354 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19212293525 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2838958384 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269359632522 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826876913849 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807377171214 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171219283675 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814844066227 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.