In the current times, although we are living in modern life, there is an increase in
issues of anti-social behavior and disrespect for another in society. I believe that
there are several reasons that render that problem more serious as well as suggest
some effective solutions to resolve this issue.
Basically, disobedience and disrespectfulness are results of many factors.
First of all, the most important is misperception about giving a personal opinion
of somebody. At the present, everyone has the right to give their own view and
discuss your opinion with others. However, some people misunderstand that
contrasting opinion with the crowd is strange and do not give them any chance
to explain and share. In addition, at this time, more teenagers are affected by
violent activities through media, surrounding society, etc. Comes with the
development of technology, young people are exposed to many bad things in the
Internet. Gradually, they form a disrespectful personality, being against and lack
of respect for other members of society. At last but not least, children are
influenced by the way their family teaches and how surrounding people treat
them.
In order to solve this problem, there are many solutions are suggested.
Firstly, some families need to have an effective way of teaching, do not use
violent activities and strong words. They have to celebrate some activities, such
as gathering at the weekend or spending time to go on holiday, that makes
the relationship between family members more closely. There is another significant
solution supporting this view is that people need to raise their awareness
about the freedom of opinion and others need to accept those conflicting views.
In conclusion, a general increase in anti-social behavior and a lack of respect
for others stem from many reasons, both objective and subjective. To tackle this
issue, there are several solutions for everyone.
- Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures 73
- Nowadays people show more anti social behavior and lack of respect to others What problems has this situation caused and how can improve them 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 66, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...portant is misperception about giving a personal opinion of somebody. At the present, everyone ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40716612378 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85859896233 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6617021185 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21615960541 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635556219356 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528722499783 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516878560637 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583142570144 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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