It is irrefutably true that nowadays the trend of purchasing new stuffs and drop old one is growing. According to my perspective the demerits of throwaway society such as effect on environment and resources, eclipsed its merits. Admittedly there are a few benefits of throwaway society but the dominant one is, it increase the profit rate of higher authorities.To explain, common people pay to the big company's on there any purchase and government of every country imposes taxes on them and government get many which it can spend on that field of country which requires improvement. Moreover, as the seal of product increase organisation fascinated by profit and will buid -up factories in the more profitable countries, it again leads to government economically strong. Thus, through old stuff helps in improving people living standard of a particular countries. Nevertheless, despite of merits there are many drawbacks of buy new stuff. The first and the foremost one is bad effect on environment. To explain, garbage of old products become an massive rubbish in societies, mainly they are made up of non disposable substances, leads to pollution. For instance, a survey was conducted in India in the 2000, illustrates the information about polluted Ganga river in which waste material of mobile phones and plastic was witnessed which was no- biodegradable. Thus, caused the extinction of many marine species. Secondly, throwing away things waste resources. To explain, it wastes the raw material, energy and money used in making the items. And that energy is produce by natural resources such as coal, petroleum primitive.Hence, by the use of such resources above the sustainable level will exhaust them till next generations.
In conclusion, although throw away society has one economic status related merit but its demerits such as pollution and exploitation of energy resources eclipsed it.
- Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses taxis and metro on vehicle free days Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Nowadays people throw away old things and adopt new things do the disadvantage of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage 56
- The graph below shows the new homes constructed in a certain region from 1999 2002
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30564784053 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00115686498 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1007019256 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16628276608 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544403892022 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627436255745 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129056970263 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197065513563 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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