Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses taxis and metro on vehicle free days Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Some cities have vehicle free days when private cars trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses taxis and metro on vehicle free days Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

State authority take many actions to preserve the environment . And vehicles free days is one of them.On that day citizens should have to use only government transport vehicles rather than their personal one's. The advantages of that action of authority outweigh the demerits. On the one hand, the dominant disadvantage of using public transportation in cities is that no proper service is providing to citizens .To explain ,there are no sufficient public vehicles are available in any city ,which satisfy the travellers need. Because on vehicle free days people have to use only public vehicles and there is too much hustle and bustle on roads for hiring vehicles ,initially they have to work hard for finding free vehicles and if they got then they may have no seat to sit.And till they reached their destination point, they will tired. And if they are employees this will lead to poor quality of their work. They have to suffer from many problems. On the other hand there are two effective benefits of vehicle free days. The first and the foremost one is ,declination in pollution.To explain ,if people of cities use public vehicles despite of personal one's, which are hotspots of pollution ,in that way they can devote their efforts in reducing atmosphere toxic gases .Because as much more vehicles as much more toxic gases emmiting in atmosphere .For example ,very polluted City, Delhi is also use that method to overcome the problem of air pollution.Besides this the another advantage of this is less consumption of fuels .To explain, if citizens use own vehicles to reach their workplace the rather than public then as the number of vehicles increase the consumption of fuel per vehicle increase that adversly affect the environment but also pocket. And if we continuousely using such energy resources then they will exhausted one day and our future generations will deprived of them .But public vehicles decrease the use of petroleum, diesel and CNG primitive, by transporting to the huge number of people in single vehicle to their destination .
In conclusion, although using public vehicle has a disadvantage which is dominant despite of its advantages outweigh the demerits ,such as reduce pollution and expenditure of fuel.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08991825613 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73083609801 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509536784741 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.227998236 49.4020404114 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.818181818 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3636363636 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340644963399 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133915414632 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832558534011 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254350867004 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723915052533 0.056905535591 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

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