Nowadays shops tend to stay open longer hours every day of week. Is this a positive or negative development?
These days there is a rising trend of stores extending their opening hours daily. From my perspective, this inclination shows favorable effects for not only the entrepreneurs but also the employees.
To commence with, that a store being active for a prolonged period of time is conducive to higher revenues for that store itself. The logic here is when a retail outlet opens sooner or closes later than it normally does, a greater number of customers may visit it, which makes it high chance that more products are sold in a day. This would eventually generates substantial income for the business. In fact, two years ago when convenience stores in Vietnam decided to sell products until midnight, instead of 9.30 p.m. as previously, profits are recorded to surge, fostering exceedingly more stores being launched in larger scales.
Another merit which should not be overlooked is that the discussed tendency would create more job opportunities for part-timers. Normally, a working day at a retail store consists of several shifts, hence stores opening for longer hours means more shifts are to fill. In this case, night or early schedules are enabled for those who are only available in such circumstances. For instance, working students can sign up for more diverse hours off-class in order to earn extra, followed by the betterment in the standard of living.
To sum up, it is evidently a positive change to lengthen service hours in shops, promoting certain benefits including attracting profit inflow and creating employment opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...at a store being active for a prolonged period of time is conducive to higher revenues for tha...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'generate'
Suggestion: generate
...re sold in a day. This would eventually generates substantial income for the business. In...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...shifts, hence stores opening for longer hours means more shifts are to fill. In this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, then, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.224 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76907493579 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1493144302 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.727272727 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121520412868 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510079816883 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475781401159 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818923644967 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313454030347 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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