The pie chart below shows the information about where cofffee is produced consumed and where its profit goes

Essay topics:

The pie chart below shows the information about where cofffee is produced, consumed and where its profit goes

The pie chart illustrates the proportions of the coffee production, consumption and the percentage of the profits which countries gain in coffee.
In general, what stands out from the graph is that production in South America makes up the highest proportion. It is also clear to see that the amount of money which Japan gains accounts for the lowest income when compared to 3 countries.
About the coffee production, the proportion of coffee which Oceania produced is the lowest, with only 2%. In the meanwhile, the figures for Africa, Asia and Central America are nearly the same, at 19%, 18% and 17% respectively. When it comes to the consumption of coffee, the percentage of shippers who drink coffee occupies 55%, which is at least 5 times more than that of producers, at one in ten.
Europe represents the highest percentage of coffee’s profits, with 55%. 27% is the figure for the others which gain money from coffee. By contrast, the figures for Japan and North America constitute only 7% and 11% corresponding.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, at least, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76697768239 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0951517434 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0460248411656 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214261496652 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412914525674 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378640545228 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479959318027 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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