Technology is intensifying day by day on a good note but still there are some of its disadvantages that cannot be neglected. I will not only bring the notion in limelight but also explain it pros and cons.
In forthcoming paragraph on one hand nowadays people are under the surveillance of cameras as well as microphone(in minuscle areas). This is a boon for folks in society since cameras can keep a check on plethora of people and suspect any stranger. In addition to this, these articles are used by Defence officers to catch the criminals on the spot. Not only this but also crime rate will reach to minimum level as Anti Social elements would be under threat of being caught on camera. Despite this, cell phone tracking help a lot of people to reach their beloved one's if they are in any trouble. Police officers being exposed to this feature find it easy to catch the criminal along with victim.
On the other hand,installing cameras on every placed somewhere affects the privacy as well as dignity of folks cell phone tracking makes kidnapping a cakewalk for criminals. Terrorists also use these modern technologies to create an unhealthy environment in various countries. Furthermore, the rudiments of using these devices are easily available on various social platforms. To be honest, politicians also use this device for umpteen crimes including drug abuse, women assaults and many more.
All in all in spite of these disadvantages these technological devices are best if in safe hands. In my opinion, advantages over take the disadvantages of the fact stated above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , installing
...al along with victim. On the other hand,installing cameras on every placed somewhere affec...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'All in'.
Suggestion: All in
...g abuse, women assaults and many more. All in all in spite of these disadvantages these tech...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...sadvantages these technological devices are best if in safe hands. In my opinion, advant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79404849872 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.328182133 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220497922814 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680693895764 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400566193463 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106546275271 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693060853513 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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