Today, It has become difficult for people to exercise a proper healthy diet and indulge themselves into physical activities for the sake of their hectic schedules. In the race of getting ahead of time, we have completely disturbed our routine which in turn is adversely affecting our health.
It is likely to blame the modern lifestyle for such changes. The thought of being better everyday has just been limited to enhancing our technical and educational knowledge. Thus, involving ourselves in some physical exercises and adopting healthy lifestyle has just become a dream. The second reason to be blamed is the growing popularity of fast foods and packaged edibles. Instead of preparing our meal we prefer running to the nearest restaurants and eating the junk there. According to a survey, 80% of youth in US is at a high risk of obesity because of the consumption of fast foods and neglecting physical health. We as a youth prefer to spend more time being in our room and sitting in front of laptops that talking a walk down the streets looks like a nightmare.
In order to improve such situations, strict actions are required to be taken into account. Schools and other institutional organizations should emphasis on physical education as well. The physical education should be made mandatory for students of all age group. To encourage elder generation to keep themselves fit, many programs can be introduced in offices like cycling to office once a week, eating green one week in month and so on.
To sum up I would recall a popular saying that 'a sound mind rests in a healthy body.' By keeping healthy we not only increase our life expectancy but also make ourselves more efficient to work and progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...uch changes The thought of being better everyday has just been limited to enhancing our ...
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Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... down the streets looks like a nightmare In order to improve such situations stri...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eating green one week in month and so on To sum up I would recall a popular sayin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es more efficient to work and progress
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, thus, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84192439863 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65394012082 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 291.0 20.2975951904 1434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1409.0 106.682146367 1321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 291.0 20.7667163134 1401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 54.0 7.06120827912 765% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147092594003 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147092594003 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775476134058 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365762365246 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 146.9 13.0946893788 1122% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -223.89 50.2224549098 -446% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.8 11.3001002004 1034% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.65 8.58950901804 252% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 118.4 10.1190380762 1170% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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