With increasing modernization, large shopping centers and supermarkets have seen a tremendous growth in past few years. The most probable reason for this development is the convenience factor of people.
Nowadays, people consider comfort over price. Although, the prices at supermarkets are higher than the those at local shops, people chose to visit shopping centers rather than local shops. The very first reason for it is the availability of plethora of variety under one roof. It saves lots of efforts making a life easier. For example, being a working couple, people prefer to visit to nearest shopping complexes to buy monthly ration and supplements saving time for other house chores and enjoyment. The second reason that can be considered for visiting supermarkets is the quality product available there. Almost all the branded products whether it be national or international can be readily purchased from these places. It exceeds the local shops in terms of luxury and quality.
Despite the fact that supermarkets have made our life more comfortable and easy, it has equally affected the markets for local shops. Many local talents are getting outnumbered even after having a great quality. The life of people that depend on these local shops for their livelihood are getting affected by these gaps. These are the people who cant afford to have shops as big as a supermarket hence at the end they choose to work under such places and shut down their shops.
To sum up the things, I would just conclude by saying that the growth of supermarkets and large shopping centers can be considered as a positive factor of development as it is the need of hour to get into international markets which is very well fulfilled by such superstores. Still, can the demotivation of local vendors be considered good?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the nearest'.
Suggestion: to the nearest
...a working couple people prefer to visit to nearest shopping complexes to buy monthly ratio...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... by these gaps These are the people who cant afford to have shops as big as a superm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, still, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67015605037 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 300.0 20.2975951904 1478% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1496.0 106.682146367 1402% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 300.0 20.7667163134 1445% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 65.0 7.06120827912 921% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322183593062 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.322183593062 0.084324248473 382% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202540523628 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142761399953 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.1 13.0946893788 1162% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -233.02 50.2224549098 -464% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.3 11.3001002004 1065% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.14 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.99 8.58950901804 256% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 122.0 10.1190380762 1206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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