Nowadays, tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion.
These days, tourism is gradually becoming a bigger contributor to the GDP. From my perspective, tourism can bring about such benefits and drawbacks as belows.
On the one hand, there are some positive aspects that tourism brings to the nation themselves. First and foremost, tourism holds the potential to promote national income growth. That increased number of tourists visiting a popular destination can give rise to employment opportunities. In tourism-driven countries like England and Thailand, the proportion of the tourism sector is even greater as there are more international arrivals. Another point to make is that pouring resources into developing tourism is one of the most effective ways to preserve traditional and cultural values. Without these rituals, festivals and celebrations, values may be lost in the mist of time. To give a prime example, the Hung festival is an occasion for Vietnamese to pay tributes to the early country builders and their ancestors. Overall, thanks to the tourism industry, locals can improve their life and pay respect to their Kings and ancestors.
On the other hand, tourism can have some grave consequences on their countries themselves. The first is that tourism, if not properly controlled, can devastate the landscape. This stems from the lack of awareness of visitors, it spoils the natural beauty. A case in point is that Sam Son beaches located in Thanh Hoa, Vietnam have been covered in rubbish. Another downside is the risk of disease transmission when there are many visitors in a place. An example is the Covid-19 pandemic causing numerous deaths and property loss worldwide. Likewise, tourism partly decreases beauty and accelerates disease transmission.
As mentioned, tourism is a mixed blessing. To be specific, it brings about both advantages, namely economic growth and traditional preservation, and such drawbacks as destruction of nature and disease transmission. It is our joined duty to maximize its strengths and weaknesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, may, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42948717949 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98384869878 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.073139526 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147880280457 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411799311692 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321347353609 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756108417568 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448594736022 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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