In a world where national exhaustive advancements are appreciated, the tourism industry's expansion holds a pivotal role in the sustained economy of nations. For the time being, tourism which enhances humans' quality of life and the perspectives of various cultures has detrimental bearings on the environment as well as pushes people into unacceptable activities. The following paragraphs will explore both the merits and demerits of this trend
On the one hand, tourism is undoubtedly beneficial to some extent, one of which is the improved living standards. A well-developed tourism industry creates numerous employment opportunities for people on account of the fact that paying a visit is associated with many other services such as restaurants, and hotels which sparks substantial demands of personnel. In other words, tourism lays the foundation for social welfare. In addition to this, people can also broaden their minds with regard to cultures thanks to thrilling visits. For the time being, traveling sites accompanied by typical events of local are more and more engaging to tourists, which is largely due to the fact that they can suss out more about diverse civilizations to form a more comprehensive outlook on them and get rid of outdated prejudices.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that tourism evolution gives rise to environmental deterioration through recreational activities. With a view to spreading traveling sites, an inexorable number of buildings are set up and a plethora of trees are cut down for this purpose. The implication of this is that endless species of flora and fauna are on the verge of extinction and disastrous catastrophes are posing a threat to the public. For example, China is rated to have the highest portion of pollution stemming from tourism services. Moreover, illegal economic activities are also prevalent in the area. In light of the competitiveness in tourism, institutions pour a lot of money and effort into hunting exotic plants and creatures, which is a premise to the imbalance of the ecosystem.
To sum up, while tourism is true that tourism is advantageous in improving living standards and exchanging multicultural horizons, it also leads to adverse environmental issues and anti-social behaviours.
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 95
- whether or not someone achieves their aim is mostly by a question of luck To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- Benefits of travelling 11
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 91
- Benefits of travelling 100
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36694677871 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13350616366 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0465592133 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115624431678 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380270859984 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223523312141 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688755681942 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00952129148314 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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