Nowadays, tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion.
Tourism has undoubtedly become a major contributor to the national income of many countries. In this essay, we will explore the advantages and disadvantages of this development and I'll also share my own opinion on the matter.
One of the significant advantages of tourism's development is its economic impact. It brings in revenue through various channels such as accommodation, transportation, food and beverage services, and local attractions. This influx of money can boost local businesses, create job opportunities, and improve infrastructure in tourist destinations. Moreover, tourism can promote cultural exchange and understanding between different nations. It allows people from diverse backgrounds to interact with each other, fostering tolerance and appreciation for different cultures. Additionally, tourists often engage in activities that support local traditions and crafts, helping to preserve cultural heritage.
However, there are also some drawbacks to consider. Over-reliance on tourism can lead to an imbalance in the economy. If a country becomes too dependent on tourism as its primary source of income, it may suffer during times of economic downturn or when faced with unexpected events such as natural disasters or political instability. Another disadvantage is the potential negative impact on the environment and local communities. Mass tourism can put a strain on natural resources like water supply or fragile ecosystems if not managed sustainably. Local communities may also face challenges such as overcrowding or loss of authenticity due to catering solely to tourists' demands.
In my opinion, while tourism brings undeniable benefits to a country's economy and cultural exchange, it should be approached with caution. Governments should strive for sustainable tourism practices that minimize negative impacts on both the environment and local communities while maximizing long-term benefits.
Overall, finding a balance between reaping the advantages of tourism's development while mitigating its disadvantages is crucial for ensuring a sustainable future for both the industry and the destinations it serves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...d disadvantages of this development and Ill also share my own opinion on the matter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94516129032 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28215463101 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0971717192 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236223940012 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069622448285 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901536509923 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141680932942 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958570399634 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.