In this day and age, there is no denying that tourism has a positive impact on a country's national income. This essay will demonstrate the merits and demerits through an analysis of both national image-promoting, economic growth, and natural spoilage and offer my own opinion as well.
The main reason it should become an essential part of national image-promoting is that it will boost unity between people of all races, backgrounds, and traditions. In other words, international companies can benefit from each other's advantages. For example, different places of interest might satisfy people’s tastes and expose them to other humans, civilizations, and cultures. Consequently, tourism’s income can nearly double and give tourists not only appreciation but also respect for different ways of life. Additionally, it will show economic growth and bring more business collaborations in the long term. This can be exemplified by such indispensable areas that account for the highest rate of national revenues as Tam Dao Mountain, Ba Na Hills, Sa Pa,...
Nevertheless, there are some possible drawbacks to consider, which could result from the unawareness of tourists. For instance, many beaches filled with trash or distinctive landscapes that have been spoiled are capable of causing terrible destruction. Besides that, more and more forests are being adversely affected in order to meet tourists’ demands. As a result, widespread deforestation will lead to pollution.
To conclude, although a portion of people believe in the negative impacts of tourism, I completely agree that its development is a very positive change for a country's economic growth. However, the government should have strict laws against illegal economic activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... as Tam Dao Mountain, Ba Na Hills, Sa Pa,... Nevertheless, there are some possi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59022556391 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11554352456 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706766917293 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9137998603 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155687889645 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421936621382 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591516389392 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932788625626 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693560815319 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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