In the contemporary era, tourism has emerged as a prominent industry in numerous nations, playing a substantial role in their overall economic prosperity. While some argue that this expansion in tourism creates fresh employment prospects for local residents, others contend that it poses a threat to the natural environment, particularly the habitats of wildlife. This essay aims to delve into the repercussions of tourism concerning its pros and cons.
On one hand, tourists necessitate services like transportation, lodging, and dining. Consequently, local inhabitants can contribute to their regional economy by offering culinary experiences or renting out their residences, ultimately enhancing their standard of living. This is exemplified by prominent corporations that provide tourist services to ensure an unforgettable experience amidst captivating landscapes. This, in turn, can generate more business opportunities and foster long-term cultural collaborations, thus promoting national economic growth and investments in the betterment of both the physical surroundings and service quality. Consequently, residents can secure their livelihoods by working for such entities as tour guides, commanding lucrative salaries. Moreover, tourism's development empowers local communities to showcase their heritage and traditions. For instance, Bat Trang village, renowned for its pottery craftsmanship, attracts tourists seeking souvenirs or hands-on pottery experiences. As a result, workshop proprietors can share their heritage and culture through handicrafts with a global audience.
However, mass tourism can exert adverse effects on the environment. Issues such as overcrowding, pollution, and the construction of tourist infrastructure can pose a threat to delicate ecosystems and mar the natural splendor. Travelers frequently rely on private vehicles like automobiles and motorcycles, thereby significantly impacting the environment due to emissions of harmful gases and pollutants. This adversely affects animals, especially endangered species dwelling in polluted environments, leading to respiratory diseases and the risk of wildlife habitats facing extinction. Moreover, it's not just animals that suffer; human populations also grapple with challenges. Popular tourist destinations find it challenging to cope with the strain on their infrastructure, resulting in problems such as traffic congestion. If these issues remain unaddressed, they could lead to a surge in accidents, causing individuals to bear the heartbreaking loss of their loved ones, an utterly devastating consequence.
In my view, I firmly maintain that the drawbacks of tourism outweigh its advantages, given that the well-being of both wildlife and humans holds paramount importance compared to any benefits brought about by tourism.
To sum up, the expansion of tourism has made a significant contribution to a nation's economic advancement and the improved quality of life for local residents. However, it is undeniable that the adverse effects it engenders significantly impact both human beings and wildlife. Consequently, it becomes imperative for society to heighten awareness about the impact of tourism and take proactive measures to safeguard the environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 728, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'coping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: coping
...ourist destinations find it challenging to cope with the strain on their infrastructure...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
... has made a significant contribution to a nations economic advancement and the improved q...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2807.0 1615.20841683 174% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14223194748 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.333322959 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630196936543 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 867.6 506.74238477 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8204450566 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.590909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132967792713 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372460240288 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368646120019 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771901527192 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220307611519 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.33 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.71 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 205.0 78.4519038076 261% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 728, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'coping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: coping
...ourist destinations find it challenging to cope with the strain on their infrastructure...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
... has made a significant contribution to a nations economic advancement and the improved q...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2807.0 1615.20841683 174% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14223194748 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.333322959 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 176.041082164 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630196936543 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 867.6 506.74238477 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8204450566 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.590909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132967792713 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372460240288 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368646120019 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771901527192 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220307611519 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.33 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.71 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 205.0 78.4519038076 261% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.