nowadays the use of mobile phones and computers for communication is significantly increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Cell-phones and computers are used more and more as communication devices, these day. There are several advantages and disadvantages, which I will explain in this essay.
Regarding to benefit, first, me must admit that gadget give easiness communication for us. Computer and cell phones allow people to establish conversation with others more quickly and instantly, so that users are able to save their time to do other activities. For example, businessmen who does not have much time in order to overcome many things in the same time because they are very busy but with gadget they could work effectively to complete their business. Moreover, people utilize cell phone and computers to communicate with other gratuitously because the items also provide free-call applications without paying phone bill again. For instance, person who is working in different country with their family can make free video and call with his beloved ones.
By contrast, we should not ignore various drawbacks. Firstly, as a human face to face communication is important for us because we are created as social creäture. Communication devices make people do not realize the essence of communications, with this item will bring people under illusion because they only have friend from virtual applications as well as seldom do they talk with other in life. Furthermore, massive use on gadget cause people to be attacked by disease because the radiation produced electronic device is dangerous for health. People who tend to use gadget constantly usually have the problem with their eyes.
In conclusion, mobile phone and computers bring benefit in term of time and cost efficiency. meanwhile, massive use of electronic devices cause a decrease eye to eye communication and dangerous for health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32978723404 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85765662708 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6059204409 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207034149371 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790647550233 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049767868845 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156364474682 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531677842286 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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