The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.

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The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.

The graphs depict the number of Fredonia male and female workers (in thousand) in six sectors between 1975 and 1995.

Overall, we can see that, the period saw a consistency in the number of male workers in various sector. Moreover, the figure for female workers increased relatively during this period.

Regarding first male categories, all sectors, except two, prevailed a steadiness, which was listed at 825 (Public Sector Non Defence), 700 (Wholesale), 650 (Manufacturing) and 300 (Communications). The exceptions were Finance/Banking and Public Sector Defence, where its number rose from 415 to 445 for former and declined from 225 to 195 for letter.

In the other hand, the figure for female workers in Wholesale and Public Sector Defence increased significantly by almost 240 and 200 respectively, succeeding to overtake man workers. Likewise, Finance/Banking and Public Sector Defence in female workers witnessed an upward trend, which showed an incline from roughly 125 to 430 and 25 to 105 each, with that the former had close level with male workers and the letter experienced an enormous climb by 400%. However, the number of female workers did not change in two sector (Public Sector Non Defence and Manufacturing) which remained stable at around 650 and 30 severally between 1975 and 1995.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... of Fredonia male and female workers in thousand in six sectors between 1975 and 1995. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25961538462 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82868861665 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7104843161 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335031901121 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164408756231 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118633564084 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238280012757 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126864647542 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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