Nowadays young people are spending most of their leisure time using smartphone and tablets for amusement . Is it a positive or negative development give your opinion .
It is well said that universal acknowledge . Human life is pampered the lap of technology. At present , a majority of masses are spending a lot of their leisure time using smartphone and tablet for amusement. Here,i would like to account this trend negative development with my own perception.
There are manifold demerits point of view. First and the foremost, technology plays a paramount role in everyone life . Youngpeople have to face some health issues while using electronic gadgets. For example, juveniles have a various health problem face such as back pain ,eyeweak , headache and many more. As a result, youngsters can get not only knowledge but also face some health problems. Adding to it, nowadays youngblood do spend a lot of their leisure time using electronic gadgets for amusement. To illustrate, youngsters do not spend time to outdoor activities owing to electronic gadget. Hence, youngsters who are depend on the smartphone for amusement their spare time.
Further emphasizing on my point of view.Initially, youngsters are not spending time with family members and friends while using electronic gadget. To demonstrate, juveniles not only sit with their family members but also do not share heart talk feeling and Idea during their electronic gadget. Thus, they do not sufficient time spend with family members. Moreover, juveniles do not concertrate their study while using electronic gadget. As a result, electronic gadget increase day by day in the world wide.
To recapitulate,there are no doubt, advancement technology increase day by day in the modern world. However, i still believe that youngpeople can get knowledge while using electronic gadget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37262357414 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95951728885 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555133079848 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1986225152 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3684210526 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8421052632 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230769432388 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730130896047 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942087167264 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142640605437 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855101749127 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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