Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way.Discuss bath views and give your opinion ?
Advancement is leading to materialistic attitudes of people in this modern world. Presently, some people assert that, a car is the good way if individual can travel in cities .By contrast, others advocate that, a bicycle could be fruitful to travel in cities. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up my point of view. To commence with, car have faster mode of travel as well as car allows people to many amenities in this 21st century. To illustrate, car can save precious time for individual while they can travel by car. Besides this, traveling by car could be lucrative to individual as they no face pollution trouble and car provide air conditioner, amusement and many more .As a result, it is extremely imperative for individual in many ways like health, save time, less no of road accident and so on.
Numerous points to endorse my point of view. To begin with, bicycle have eco-friendly mode of travel and it is good for mankind health .To demonstrate, pollution problem can decreased if people can more and more use of bicycle.it assistant to individual safe environment in these days. Moreover, bicycle can be fruitful to people in order to stay fit and fiddle and it is supposed to good for legs exercise and therefore, become enable to people live long life. Hence, bicycle allows to people many faculties and therefore, the role of bicycle is phenomenal for people.
To recapitulate, undeniable, traveling by car have several benefits. However, In my opinion, traveling by bicycle are more lucrative for people as it is better way to save their atmosphere and good environment have paramount for everyone life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90940766551 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76108606455 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0073138955 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253026432691 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933722725244 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679826164793 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17268670413 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397001549737 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.