The chart below gives information about Southland s main experts in 2000 2020 and future projections for 2025

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The chart below gives information about Southland' s main experts in 2000,2020 and future projections for 2025.

The bar graph shoe data regarding Southland' s experts for year 2000, 2020 as well as projections for 2025. Overall, although dairy products and international tourism look as though they will both be experts tourism will be strongest.
The tourism industry shows a steady upward trend. In 2000, it is clearly the strongest three industries tourism in 2000 providing the about 8 billion then 2020 spread at the around 9 billion and future projections for 2025 in nearly 10 billion at which time it will be strongest of three industries which highlighted in this graph.
Dairy shows a relatively positive trend. Starting at the around 7 billion in 2000. Then increased approximately 10 billion in 2020. Dairy products decease around 9.5 billion in future projections for 2025. Which time it will be some fluctuations in this graph.
Meat products are tried biggest industries. In 2000 the meat products show 6 billion and 2020 decrease meat products around 5.5 billion then decline the 5 billion in future projections for 2025 . Which time all the less industries in this graph.
Overall, tourism and dairy products look will both be experts tourism will be strongest in order to meat products a downward trend. Southland' main experts 2000,2020 and future projections for 2025 had some fluctuations.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74070658616 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457547169811 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.8549456317 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7142857143 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277976956589 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118439049562 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15666144298 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191487463732 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566379904042 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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