Nowadays young people have to make decisions about their career.However some people believed that the parents and teachers make a better choice for their career. Discuss both options and include your own opinion and with your own experience?
It is irrefutable that, today’s youngster are the leader of tomorrow. Whereas, juvenile have to take decisions to ensure their bright future. While, few people think that parents and tutors take better decision to make their career bright. Here, I would like to discuss both sides and give my own opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, students have capability to make quality of decision by their own. For example, they are well educated, advanced and technically skil ful. Which give them optimum opportunity to take their decision. As a result, it would be fruitful for them to show their exceptional talent. Moreover, youngsters should have freedom to choose their decision by themselves to make their professional career interesting. For instance, they can know their ability and requirements according to their decisions. In result, they can progress by leaps and bounds to make their future bright. Furthermore, they also reduce the burden of their parents while taking own decision. Which brings joy and prosperity in parents life as well as children’s.
On the other hand, parents have equally importance to take quality of decisions related to their children life. For example, they have better experience of every stage of life by which it should be lucrative to help their children to scale the height of success. In addition, young blood donot have much experience of life. So that sometime they take wrong decisions according to their ability and ruin their life by their own self. As a result, it would be detrimental for them to take their to take their career at back seat. Last but not the least, parents have keenly knowledge about the strength and weakness of their offspring. For example, parents always keep touch with their juveniles since from their childhood instead of others. So that, they know every movement of their children by which parents play an vital role for making decision in children life.
To conclude, it is vividly said that, every coin has two aspects. But according to me, juveniles take their own decisions related to their future. But they have to follow the pattern of their parents experience to some extent. Which would be worthwhile for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
...of their children by which parents play an vital role for making decision in child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09589041096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58952086589 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484931506849 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2258044242 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37635264337 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123949147035 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778296990951 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267041201218 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337598290108 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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