Nowadays, young people have the tendency to stay at home rather than going out for outdoor activities. Discuss the causes and solutions to this phenomenon.
Write an essay to express your views and include relevant reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience
At present time, young people tend to spend more time on staying at home, and do not prefer the outdoor activities. There are vary comments on this topic. In this essay, I am going to give my own opinion and explain why to demonstrate my ideas.
We are living in a rush world, which do not agree us to go outside as much as before. So do young people. They all have personal problems and stuffs to work on and staying at home is the best remedy for them after a tough day. For example, they are drained in deadlines as homework, major assignments or presentations. So that they have to spend 7 to 8 hours a day to complete all tasks. After finishing it, they will be totally exhausted and they just want to come back home and have some rest. Secondly, with the digital developments, they can entertain themselves with a mobile phone and a computer at home, which is more comfortable than going out with a extreme sunlight.
As some causes are mentioned, there are some solutions to improve these kinds of problem. They need to change their mind and be more active to participate in activities that held outside. Secondly, the government and organization should care more for outdoor activities. They can hold events, recruit young people for staff work and give them certificate as a prize for their hard work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is more comfortable than going out with a extreme sunlight. As some causes ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62127659574 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57615207804 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6659631967 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5714285714 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20672471916 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649234211098 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361686621246 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14288434372 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329793883254 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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