In the present scenario, sending wards to boarding schools is becoming viral.No doubt it is a positive development.Let us discuss about it in upcoming paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason for this notion is a working of both parents.Nowadays due to expensiveness both genders are working to fulfill the demands of their offsprings and they came late from their work however, at that moment they have not enough energy to teach them about social values, rituals, discipline etcetera and choose boarding Institutions to teach them every aspect of discipline, moral values and social life in the small age.
On the other hand, the second main reason is the domestic violence. Everyday due to some personal reasons there is a fight in home between parents and grandparents and the children are unable to bear that sort of things at that stage parent choose the boarding institutions in their homeland and some rich class select at abroad to keep them away from that environment.
In conclusion, from a personal perspective only that parents should choose boardings for the children who have not enough time for them and want an excellent level services.Otherwise no institute have a potential to teach a student as best as their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, in conclusion, no doubt, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11274509804 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93071259539 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.250692006 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.6 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132241578128 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075285732066 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349794667427 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864123026733 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334075058331 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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