Nowadays, remuneration as been playing a prominent role while selecting a job. An universal opinion exists about the salary that it is the most important and crucial one above all other factors, for a desired job. I strongly, disagree because work satisfaction and career development are other aspects that have to be considered.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable that monetary gain is elemental in a job, directly affecting on people's selection of an occupation, a company or a position. High payment can provide various luxuries, multitude of choices on lifestyles and enables the employees to fulfil their basic needs in day-to-day life. A high paid job can bring respect among other collegues, which is a solid reason for considering it. Furthermore, a good salary can provied financial security when they retire and can be act as an insurance against multiples diseases and other burdens. Apparently, leading them to a prosperous life.
On the other hand, keeping in mind of salary merits, I believe that job satisfaction should be prioritized when applying for a job. In other words, fondness on job or dedication can yield fruitful results, developing a successful career. It is the important criterion to climb up the professional ladder. Moreover, earnings can produce negative effects if prioritized more. For instance, people who indulge more into monetary gain often have a tendency to work for extra hours abandoning the facets like regarding health, relationship and etc. Inevitably they will suffer depression and stress due to long-term working.
In conclusion, earnings play's a prominent role in job, I agree that it is a crucial part. Meanwhile, workers should focus more on their feelings while taking a job, as occupational satisfaction will take them a long way in their career than income will.
- The best way to remove poverty in developing countries to provide 6years of free education to all children so that they can read write and use numbers Do you agree or disagree 73
- The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia Darwin 1 Sydney 2 Melbourne 3 Brisbane 4 Perth 5 and Canberra 6 in October 2009 and October 2010 73
- Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities the government encourages businesses to move to the rural area Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- As the number of cars increases more money has to be spent on road systems Some people think the government should pay for this Others however think the drivers should cover the costs Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some children nowadays take sports seriously while others play sports in their free time Is this a positive or negative development Give your own opinion and examples 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...a prominent role while selecting a job. An universal opinion exists about the sala...
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Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ets like regarding health, relationship and etc. Inevitably they will suffer depression ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19727891156 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9513070557 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605442176871 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4106105132 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152082832201 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484427603067 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492794745551 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956728386025 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348132069045 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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