In a number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spend on improving existing public transport
In some countries, some people think a lot of money have to expend to establish new railway line for quick trains.But others want the money expend to enhancing public transport.Acording to the survey if trains and railway lines increas it will good for the nature of the country and all people of the countries.
On the one hand trains do not cause to air polution, therefor many country is tried to increase their railway lines for realy fast train , due to people go fast their work,home or vacation . According to the evedience less fuel have spent this 10 year than in the past, as less fuel spend for train than public transport.
On the other hand although train is very fast, if the location is close to people choose public transport because you do not spend your time to booking tiket.And the tickets of public transport cheapper than trains' tickets.
To sum up,according to the fact that there are a large amount of advantages than outweight of disadvantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63555670961 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7037825701 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.6 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397630145488 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178895223568 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948525375629 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204516252886 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098220999749 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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