The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year on year. While some people believe prisons are the best way to tackle crime others suggest that community service is successful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, crime levels are rising every year so the amount of people that end up in prison it is also grown. Many ascertain the prison is the most vital way of punishment while others believe the prisoners should do community service as a part of their punishment. I believe that by doing community service crime makers will learn and be punished at the same time and as a result the society will benefit.
Imprisonment was always the most well-known way of penalty for offenders. Prison is a huge building which it is utilised by the low to keep the offenders until their imprisonment is over. Prisoners live in cells with only a bed and they are locked up most of the day. In addition,they live in isolation far from the real life to be punished for their actions. Therefore is believed that with this treatment the prisoners will understand what they have done and they will pay for their actions by living in isolation.
On the other hand ,community service that is it done by prisoners will bring positive impacts in the society as well at the offenders.Firstly, prisoners will benefit because they will not feel useless and it is also a way of showing that they are not ripped from the real life.Moreover instead o spending all of their time in locked cells they will be responsible for a specific community job which will help them to adapt to the population quicker when they will be free again.Secondly,society will benefit.Moreover a lot of community services need to be done but the workers are not exist so by putting prisoners in those places the work will be finished.
In conclusion,it is argued which way of punishment is more successful imprisonment or community service. In my opinion community service must be considered as a form of punishment because it is beneficial for both offenders and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82857142857 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00662910817 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498412698413 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.689155061 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5454545455 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223479346271 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952211294197 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656046742394 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155366113056 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869615730027 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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